Thank you so much—please do let me know what you didn’t like!)

Very good angles and shots—the positioning of the cathedral, in particular, works well. It might be worth refining the fire effects and adding more black tones to the characters.

Thank you—do come back and share any thoughts you might have! 🙇

Thanks for pointing that out!)) Yes, that’s a typo; the previous text template had “2 st” I forgot to put it away … . 😩

Thank you, I look forward to hearing your opinion )

Ah… you mean the typo. I get it now.))

I’m not a barbarian. I wouldn’t make people read everything.))

You can understand Chapter 3 perfectly well without reading the previous ones.

Really cool, great aesthetic! The only thing is, I’d remove the medallion on the left collarbone; it looks like a stunted limb, which gives it a satirical vibe. 🖤 🖤 🖤

I like this vermicelli! 👍

Now you have two cuties. A good result.!)

Absolutely — thank you so much for taking the time to read both episodes and share such thoughtful feedback! It genuinely means a lot to me. I’m especially glad to hear that the worldbuilding is interesting to you, because I was honestly worried that the lore might feel too dense and overwhelming. Knowing that it’s making you want to learn more about the world and its characters is incredibly encouraging.

And yes, you were absolutely right about that missing word. 😄 It turns out the word simply didn’t fit in the text box during editing, and I somehow failed to notice it.

Drumroll… 🥁 - OPERATIONS!

with their appearance taken for himself through alchemical operations.

Thank you again for catching it and for reading INFITRUS! It really means a lot. 🙏

Thank you so much! Here’s the general link — read it on whichever platform is most convenient for you.

https://lnk.bio/23off_Sugar

I’m truly grateful for your attention and support!!

No, it will remain black and white.

Creating one chapter already takes about a month, so I simply don’t have enough time to color it as well. 😵